Grammer

   3.b Frying his body all day,/ Jacob Jhonson/ got a horrible sunburn by afternoon/ because the cheap suntan lotion from his brother/ became a thin liquid and dripped into the sand.

   4.b All kinds of vegetables/ from celery to fresh tomatoes/ were laughing or dancing or playing in the salad bowl/ and the salad dressing/ that had been as quiet/ and unnoticed/ as the bowl itself suddenly giggled with glee.